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CrabbWalker

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Please don't take this the wrong way, but there's a miniscule amount of planning, artwork, or effort put into this...therefore, my score is justified and it stands.

Not bad...but I almost always reference that animation Harry did about Go!Animate. Try introducing your own voices into the animation. You have too much of a unique script and too much potential as an artist to limit yourself to a program that conveniently strict you to a style, ya know?

I'm normally euphemistic in most of my reviews, but I have to say that you really could have shortened this to a 10 second animation, and made it more over the top instead of an anti-climatic ending. Otherwise, I liked the humor in this a lot! Keep making more.

Greasegoat responds:

I will

lol this could easily become a series. You are very well-versed in animation all around. Nice voicing. Great animation and setup. One very small thing... I think your animation is "too smooth" like it needs a bit more exaggeration, or a little bit more quicker-static movements to break up the fluidity. The ending was brilliant, lol.

Nice use of the camera pan and shake for extra effect, but I think it was overdone a little bit. The character design was pretty good, and I liked the way you handled your fights...a lot more paced out, more wear and tear on the armor and weaponry as he advances, and quick battle moves that makes or breaks you. Nice experimentation, and would like to see more from you!

The animation and gestural movement was superb, love frame-by-frame. Storyline is excellent as well, and your character designs are pretty good too. As many has stated, I also voice concern for the audio. Having sound effects (POW, BOOM, STOP) for all of those little movements would make this animation GOLDEN. It would fit perfectly. The voice acting is kind of good, but your audio is pretty balanced. Overall, 4.5/5 stars!!

Nice Egoraptor-esque facial expressions! It was pretty funny.

I liked it. Simplistic and nice use of camera angles and effects. I wish you put a bit more detail into the background work though.

shrizumalonito responds:

Yeah. But every experiment I try, I only focus on the animation and props.

What morals ???

You cannot even grasp a message out of this flash movie. If a flash is no longer than 4 seconds, no matter how detailed it is, it shouldn't even be posted up.

fidu21 responds:

moral1 use the stairs
moral2 do not join the army

loads of room for improvement...

Not bad I guess. 2, because I do not know what is happening in the scene. And what about the glitchy trail they leave behind when they move? Sprites aren't fluid...At least u included a play, pause, and stop button, something I didn't do on my first, lol.

spongebb0704 responds:

Thanks brother i was 8 years old

An animating night owl...without the whole 360 head turn.

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