CrabbWalker's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

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I liked it. Simplistic and nice use of camera angles and effects. I wish you put a bit more detail into the background work though.

shrizumalonito responds:

Yeah. But every experiment I try, I only focus on the animation and props.

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What morals ???

You cannot even grasp a message out of this flash movie. If a flash is no longer than 4 seconds, no matter how detailed it is, it shouldn't even be posted up.

fidu21 responds:

moral1 use the stairs
moral2 do not join the army

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loads of room for improvement...

Not bad I guess. 2, because I do not know what is happening in the scene. And what about the glitchy trail they leave behind when they move? Sprites aren't fluid...At least u included a play, pause, and stop button, something I didn't do on my first, lol.

spongebb0704 responds:

Thanks brother i was 8 years old

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Keep doin' ur thing...

Reason for rating this a four was only for two reasons:
- Much too short
- the animation drawings were way too flat and the color palette consisted of primary and secondary colors only...
Other than that, keep working at it ! In your next one, try to incorporate frame-by-frame animation along with tweening ! I also recommend Wacom tablet (if you want to get serious).

Slekryn responds:

Thanks for the review!

About the tablet, I was planning on getting one, so thanks for the recommendation!

-S

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Love it

Great visual storytelling !! I also noted you've used after effects for the credits-it makes your work look more professional. Makes me want to check out programs other than flash, lol...

RiverJordan responds:

You should ;) There's so many limits with Flash. combining adobe products blasts the roof of limits clean off