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Nice.

WaldFlieger responds:

Thank you!

This is not half bad for your first animation! Obviously you have had experience syncing music with video (AKA Tarboy) so that was excellent, and the drawings were decent. One critique I have for this music video is the movements of your characters- maybe try your hand in including more gestures and more exaggeration. Obviously, making your own music and making your own animation is overwhelmingly challenging, so I applaud you for that. Keep posting!

hania responds:

Thanks! And yep - practice, uploads and practice, I'll get better with time... and practice. :p Glad you liked the music ! :D

Not bad. Everything looks sprite-y.

Agent64 responds:

Thanks! I'm glad you like it! There's more where that came from.

This was amazing man...so precise. Next time, I want to see animation with a plot from you young sir.

AaLBERT responds:

Thanks a lot! In a few minutes, I will submit more animations, personal and others heroes =)

hm...i..just don't know...I was entranced man 0_0

ZabuJard responds:

thanks for the review :1

Wittingly short, but very funny. The title drew me in more so than the animation...I'd work on the backgrounds just a little bit more so it all looks squeaky clean, but that's just me. Good Job!

coponfilms responds:

Yeah I need to work on my backgounds a bit more. Thanks for the advise by the way.

You had a pretty nice story going...I recommend basically what ClimbLadders said. I wouldn't worry about the drawing aspect of it yet--you'll improve over time. If you make another one, storyboarding will definitely help the pacing of your characters and dialogue, and it'll flow much more seamlessly! Trust me, it works like a charm.

flashmakeit responds:

I will trust your words. Thank you

Nice Test, even if it is just stickmen. It's very fluid and flexible.. one thing though, try to pace the movements better. For example, when the black stick is about to punch the grey one at around 3 sec, animate him holding his punch back, then exerting force to make him seem like he's that much more powerful...And just little things like that. Don't be afraid to animate the little details in between the punches and kicks, build up to it (and since you're testing it with stick people, this is the perfect opportunity :)

jssuzuki responds:

Thanks. I'll try to keep that in mind.

Anything short of a 5 is blasphemy (no pun intended). Beyond great, you deserve my favorite, you deserve a follow, and I will plunder the internet until this movie is presented, wherever that may be. The Sin City-esque art style, and deciding to go black and white, was an excellent choice. This is such a gripping trailer, in a sense that it doesn't show too little or too much. Can't wait!

deweydarklight responds:

This is great to read! Thanks!

I'm normally euphemistic in most of my reviews, but I have to say that you really could have shortened this to a 10 second animation, and made it more over the top instead of an anti-climatic ending. Otherwise, I liked the humor in this a lot! Keep making more.

Greasegoat responds:

I will

An animating night owl...without the whole 360 head turn.

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